All Comments on 'Galactic Bounty Hunter Ch. 02'

Very good story and I would love to see it turned into a series, but even if you open the universe to other writers I think it'll still be nice especially with the ground work you've laid.

I enjoyed the story, and hope to see you take it further. Also I hope to read more of "Doc."

I love your stories, Would love to see this as a series. Also want more stories about Doc. Please keep writing as you are a wonderful story teller.

yea i fully agree with other comments here love galactic bounty hunter series so far would love to read more but would also love to read more of your "doc" series

The Story, that is. I have the same problem. Once you start an alternate world, it owns you!

LOL.

The chapters are a bit short, but better that the "Doc" series. You add too many references to the same things, which gets redundant, but I can see the reasons. I think your telling too much of the story and not showing enough. Hard to do In first person, ask me how I know?

Nice to see the five year leap in this series, it sets up the stage and now we can see if you have a story to tell.

I've been giving you 4's. I'm waiting for your best work to come. Keep it up.

I enjoyed this new series and would like to see it continued. You are a gifted writer!

PLEASE continue the Doc series!

I'm glad so many like my little tales. Until about 6 months ago I didn't think I was capable of writing since I am badly dyslexic. how ever a couple of authors on storiesonline.com encouraged me to try. I have to use a voice to text program to type and a spelling and grammar program. but I also give a lot of credit to great editors make my stories readable.

Kingkey

You are doing a fabulous job even with all you have to go through to get the story printed. Please don't give up!

Can't wait to read more episodes of both stories.

great read, love to read more

K

Nothing wrong with your cognative thinking an editor probably has no trouble with your stories. Good thoughts and morals are learned through life and youv'e lived well. (From your writing)

Your stories are a joy to read and hopefully as fun for you to write as us to read. Have fun write on and I'll (we) look forward to your next chapter/story.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

x

I would love to see more of your stories. Please tell me that you're continuing them?

As a Dyslexic writer myself, I can understand your troubles. I congratulate you in your tenacity in writing this great story.

It's a lot of work, but I would suggest copying your story, then separating all of the paragraphs into sentences, then read them back, one line at a time.

It does actually help with making sure your reader understands the images you wish them to have. It also makes sure that the story flows nicely.

Good luck in your future stories, I will be one of your consistent readers.

WP

I think this has huge potential and would love to read a big series on there exploits. She should bring the cold storage on the new ship incase very dangerous prisoners, escape artists, or large groups needing separated. The introduction and integration of Desiree in to the story was way too rushed. I feel cheated ;)

Needs more details then will be better but that's my say. Don't stop writing ever , enjoyed very much.thanks

I liked your story , it's not the usual bounty hunter story !

Love it, keep them coming.

please you have fans who read your stories, and they are very good I for one would like to see at least one finished.

thanks for what you have posted but we want more.

barron43_1943@hotmail.com

Ugh, unfinished story, I hate that!!