All Comments on 'Galactic Slave Ch. 07'

by dweaver999

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I love this series

Can't wait to read the next chapter. The romantic in me would love to see Susan and her "Master" fall in love, but I know I"ll love whatever direction you take this series in. You have a great writing talent. Wonderful sex scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
AWESOME!

Loving it - keep 'em coming!

FunkydrummerFunkydrummeralmost 15 years ago
If I could give this a 4.5, I would

A great story. The only thing keeping it from perfection is the occasional spelling mistake (eg: "I rubber his . . ."). A great series; looking forward to the next installment.

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
VERY GOOD

Of course there will be jell-o (jelly to us Brits) in the 45th century! Actually i think i just might stop reading for a couple of minutes to go and make some for tomorrow, but i think i am out of lime.

i am sorry Master Dweaver there are quite a few spelling errors, but still ghave You a five for a wonderful piece of story telling and an amazing sex scene.

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