All Comments on 'Galena's Awakening Ch. 01'

Thank you for reading my story. Please leave comments so I can make the story better. Thank you.

Pretty good story, although I'm usually not keen on the nonconsent/bdsm thing. Keep in mind, this isn't a criticism but just my own personal preference.

There were a few minor punctuation errors I noticed that can be easily fixed. End the sentences in question marks when a character is asking a question. Also, be sure to put the commas inside the quotation marks.

Example: "Too many questions," he chuckled again.

Instead of: "Too many questions", he chuckled again.

TY54CE

Pretty much what Et2 said. It was a good story and it will be interesting to see where you take it. I hope that you continue submitting.

Please continue, please!

Get this edited, there are several incorrectly used words that i noticed. for example the last sentence uses "defiantly" instead of "definitely". or at least that's what i'm assuming you wanted. You also made a few errors on commonly confused words on the first page

so sad you didn't continue

Will there ever be a chapter 2.... ?