All Comments on 'Game Night'

by Ravlicious

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Abrupt

There was a fair bit of development, and then they screwed and it was all over.

I think you could have expanded that last scene a bit.

Otherwise, well-written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I want a sequel!

I definitely thought this story had good potential, and I thought maybe they would use the Monopoly game in some sort of dirty fashion. Please write a sequel!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Like the first time... great, but over too soon

This story was expertly crafted, but it didn't last long enough. It could've used more tension.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wow.

That was so perfect. I'd have loved for that to have been my first time. Beautifully written. Great job.

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