by Ashson
Fun premise. Would have been more interesting if there had been lewd comments or thoughts from those not involved in the action.
that a woman's hymen, if present, is NOT somewhere down the vaginal canal. it´s at the door of the vagina. if you break through a hymen, ONLY THEN can you start on the vagina. very surprising lack of knowledge of basic human anatomy.
I missed out on this type of activity when I was young. Now I am old, but I can certainly enjoy a good lusty tale such as this. Well done!
I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
Very good, interested and believable, liked the games and looking forward to part 2
I know it's a fantasy story , but so many virgins and not a drop of virgin blood running down their inner thighs or at least some cum leaking from their pussys? I believe little, but essential, details like that can better a story, make it hotter, and should not be left out.
You should write a 3rd chapter where the couples sleep nude and the house gets broken into by a gang of 6 or 8 guys who really help the guys "educate" the girls.