by thornapple
Well written and very, very erotic. You made an old married man dream once again about the chase and feelings he thought he had long lost. My only comment is that the length of time it took for them to satisfy their lust seems unrealistic. Not many women and fewer men could wait as long as they appeared to. A sequel with marriage in the story could be well received. Thanks for a GREAT story.
I liked this and the only problem I had with the story is that it was not long enough to let us in on any of the good stuff.!!
Enjoyed your story, but it could have continued just a bit further.