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LeaHarvey1821LeaHarvey1821over 9 years ago
well,

I usually enjoy these types of stories and I did to a point. The only thing that bothered my was the gas mask that she was wearing. It just didn't feel sexy to me, of course, everyone to there own. It was well written and definitely had a great drawn out tease to it. Pretty good.

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I write occasionally but not often enough. Mainly for me but hopefully you enjoy.