All Comments on 'Genesis Project Ch. 02'

I like your series and hope to see some more chapters on it very soon. Wolfmann

hoping there would be more of this soon...

-LW

be a very good series but you need to let it flow more, more conversation, not quite so mechanical...

I love good sci-fi but in this case you are providing yet another explanation for the origin of our species that follows a biblical time-scale and ignores all of the scientific evidence for our evolution including the evidence that our genus Homo goes back millions of years.

Other than that the story line is ok but is too mechanical as another reviewer said. What feelings are going through these characters heads? How does this momentous event affect their world views? This being literotica where is the sex or at least the rommance?

This is written by a seven year old?

You had a good idea. Would enjoy reading it if yoy haven't botched it. It is amateur site I understand that but sometimes it is better to get an editor

SPOILER ALERT: This is a long abandoned story. It's good but incomplete.