All Comments on 'Genesis Project Ch. 03'

i am willing to read at the time when those guys go to space, explore plantes and have fights. also they could get more crew from other planets, trade of knowledge, etc. but this can go slow. good grammar and plot. just being honest, there's nothing sexual in this.

-LW

You are off to a good start and I hope you will continue with this series. I can't wait to see what's next.

shows a promising ability to bring the story together abd allow characters to develop naturally, and thus far without pushing thier roles in thegroup

I was holding out for improvements after the first two chapters. Then this chapter went straight past 'horrendous drivel' and dived headfirst into 'psychological torture' territory.