by Mr. Marvel
wouled love to see the whole book. you have a good start for a thick boook
This is THE best non-erotic sci-fi story i have seen here. dont stop writing this!!
always a fan.
those ppl can be your new recruits for the ship:)
hoping there might be a little more action and ship killing. the humans can go fight for the slave's homeworld which could be imprisoned.
overall, i find this the 12th best story i have ever read in all literotica.com and other books in my life:))))
-LW
I have loved your story the whole time, I been folowing it from chapter 1. I was starting to get worried that you were not gona continue, I realy like this series:) you are a good writter and PLEASE continue the series. Way to good to stop, might I sugest the slaves become crew members and get a bit of romance or sex involved... that would be cool:)
I read the description and thought he was going to be stupid enough to get caught XD