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Click hereTingle. "Yes, Jack, that should be fine."
"Good. Make it so!" He watched her eyes flash. "Now, would you care to join me for a little midnight snack of peanut butter and jelly sandwiches before we hit the sack? Tomorrow's going to be a big day, after all. I mean, just going to the grocery store with you along is going to be a great adventure."
"That sounds lovely, Jack."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoAside from this story's obvious attractions - intriguing relationship; hot sex, some of it pretty imaginative - there are so many fun little reminders of science fiction I've read. Can't call them "references" or "Easter eggs" because I don't know how many are intended and how many accidental, but still...
Isaac Asimov's Three Laws of Robotics, when she talks about using her magic for "protecting you, then myself". Prioritizing his protection is the 1st and 3rd laws. It'll be interesting to see if the 2nd (obeying his commands) comes into conflict with them. (No, I don't see Genie as a robot. She very clearly has a mind and desires of her own - even if a lot of the time, she's only free to express those as happiness or otherwise with Jack's decisions. Still, she was "created" to "serve", and those who created her would have been wise to put similar safeguards in place, even if they didn't express them in modern terms.)
Brian Aldiss ("The Primal Urge" -- a much more primitive, strictly technological version of the "tote board"); and John Boyd ("The Girl with the Jade Green Eyes", which I won't explain because it'd be a spoiler for that book).
And now, "make me forget, and never reveal that you did so" is feeling awfully like "1984"'s doublethink: to deliberately forget something, and then forget the act of forgetting. I see Jack and Genie's whole discussion around "make me forget" as setup for having safe, sane, consensual fun with the idea, *without* diving down the Orwellian rabbit/memory hole.
tiercenptover 3 years agofirst, I liked the story.
then you mentioned some underage things which creeped me out...
"pleasure-torture" in your last chapter...(which is a proven fact; is and was used as an interrogation tactic; nitrous oxide better known as laughing gas); gave me a head scratch.
this wishing and forgetting thing...I don't know where you are going with this.
also, it seems to me now the story is a purely wishing and fucking marathon (imbedded in her; "float me there, fly us there; whereas before you had a good chunk of story in it.
hope it changes with the next chapters and family meeting?
Slyyder74about 4 years agoWell I really love the story so far. This chapter and hiding shit from yourself is absolutely stupid and Destined cause more problems in the story than it’s actually worth. I really hope you make this work out because I hate one star the story.
Michael56Smithover 5 years agoThis is absolutely the BEST incomplete erotic fiction ever presented in this format. Where did you go Joe?,.. and I thank you for 26 awesome installments!
Kisses and hugs for my favorite Genie fantasy girl (Jennifer), love ya babe!
