All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 12'

I am really engrossed in this story. Great work JB keep working at that keyboard.

I have been hooked since the beginning and look for new installments every day. Keep it cumming!!!

I love the story line and read each submission over and over. Very erotic.

I've read every chapter of this wonderful story, many of them multiple times. I love the sudden twists and the intelligence of the characters. Just enough sex and eroticism, and well balanced with a solid storyline and interesting verbage. Can't wait for the next!

Read the entire series so far in about two hours. Then I read it again to savor it, because it's so well written and so intense. As someone mentioned earlier, you could easily take this in any or every direction.

In short, keep going and don't you /dare/ stop.

Loved this story Keep it coming pleaseeeeeee

Please keep the story going. It is great and moves so smoothly. Waiting for the next chapters.

This series of stories is by far my favorite on this site. Please keep writing!

can't wait for the 13th chapter and hopefully many more after that. Waiting for the party with his freinds and when Genie meets his family.

Jack probably has the only personality that can be trusted with a Genie. The way you have outlined the mechanics of magic is truly brilliant. This is one of very few stories on Lit that I've kept reading primarily out of interest in the characters. My one criticism is that the exposition by other characters about Jack's work seems awkward.

I really enjoyed how you detailed the shop scene through the viewpoint of another character for once. You're a very talented writer and this story has kept me totally engrossed for some time. Looking forward to reading the rest of your work.

Very well written and entertaining, but a little less erotic. Thats not bad its an excellent piece and the story line is strengthened.

Pretty good I'd say. Actually feels like a novel more than a erotic story, which is good, a nice change of pace.

And too talkative.

You said she had a penis instead of a clit. Does she also have a prostate? If yes, then she can ejaculate. Without testicles she is sterile, but otherwise capable.

"[A magical AIDS cure] needs to be done the right way or no one will accept it."

It's eerie, reading that from the vantage point of 2021.

OOOHHH GAWD! So hot!!!

If you ever decide to continue this story, please please do, maybe some chapters from Genie’s perspective, and what’s she’s thinking feeling doing

“Good morning Mr. Phillips, this is your eight o'clock wakeup fuck," said a beautiful face, framed by a deep red mane of long, silken hair, going in and out of focus. It took him a few blink-filled seconds to figure out it was doing so because its owner was riding his rock-hard cock while leaning over him, propped up on her arms.

"Thank you, Miss Holiday. Might I say that you are as stunningly beautiful as ever this morning?" She beamed at him...and kept slamming down on his shaft. He reached up to fondle his most favorite pair of breasts in the entire world until he and Jennifer had a lovely synchronized cum several long crotch-slapping moments later.”

I'm so impressed with the way Jack is looking out for Genie / Jennifer and the women around him, to the point of giving them lasting gifts, including sexual health. Thank you for writing a good guy rather than a jerk.

Still loads of fun, and I appreciate the new exploration of powers. And surely new job is going to get spicy in multiple ways