All Comments on 'Georgie Girl Ch. 10-12'

This is my daily fix.

if his parents are selling the inn where will they have the wedding?

I'm thoroughly enjoying your story.

No stock for Kevin??? Highly unrealistic.

To the last anonymous - they're only just starting to develop the prototype. I would think that corporation shareholding decisions would still be some way down the track but, in any case, we haven't seen Kevin's employment contract - stock options may well be included. :-)

To Coaster2 - this is my favourite kind of story on here. The plot comes first - the sex is nicely described, but it takes a back seat. Stroke stories are a dime a dozen - stories like this and "Justin Thyme" are where the real talent lies.

I like the story. As an engineer the Filter details are off. With water it would probably be some type of osmotic membrane and it would have to be a set sequential filters and not one big filter. The filters would be removable not only to replace them but to allow for the different water conditions. You would also need a UV light as viruses and pathogens are too small to filter.

These things do exist in real life - I have one!

Wonderful and unlikely people. Reads sort like a delicious comic book.

Another exciting chapter!

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