All Comments on 'Georgie Girl Ch. 16-18'

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

I am thoroughly enjoying your work. I love the balance of 'real life', romance and a fascinating story line. I always have enjoyed stories in which I get to learn about something technical and usable (of course, my farming background has me utterly enthralled with the 'clean water' theme - I once spent a summer in my youth living on a bare minimum of water because of our wells slowing down and the understanding was that the cows and calves needed the water first). Thank you for involving the analytical side side my brain :-D

You should have mention the IBU level on the Alpha Dog beer. I live close to Sandpoint and frequent Laughing Dog Brewery, great place with great beers on tap.

I was sure she was run off the road as a "revonoer". The development of both the business and the product are fascinating.

if you decide to take your writing to a commercial level, and you should, you need to do reserach. the rental cars you mentioned do not have gps trackers. i know this for a fact! still a good story though.

Why would anybody, send out, or even allow anyone, out in the rough, by-themselves without the barest minimum of some kind of protection, especially an attractive young woman, not on my watch.

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Why would anybody, send out, or even allow anyone, out in the rough, by-themselves without the barest minimum of some kind of protection, especially an attractive young woman, not on my watch.

Because they're from the People's Republic of California, where defending yourself and the means to do so are for all practical purposes forbidden, and certainly socially unacceptable.

A Very Good & Enjoyable Read !

THANK YOU !

Another exciting chapter!

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