All Comments on 'Get Your Fuck On!'

would a been better

if Elroy was involved

in a passive manner with

his wife as she did

the Black thang ...imho

Hi

I'm getting a lot of comments to my e-mail adress. Please feel free to post your comments, I wont delete them, here are some of the comments I've recieved in the last hour.

Somebody says I'm talented, somebody else wants me dead. DAMN!!!

Comment Anon

Hi, Really great story. Enjoyed the entire read. Please continue posting, you have a talent reserved for very few. Thanks for sharing.

Comment: Anon

hard to follow so I gave up 1/2 thru it. Read a K.K. or OHIO story to get a clue how to write (Word up KarenKay)

Comment Anon

I hope you die painfully, slowly, and soon, wish I could be the cause.

(You could've at least told me what pissed you off so much)

Comment Anon

schwachsinniger scheiße (German for weak shit)

(didn’t like the German-Cajun cocktail skit huh? Wasn't even meant like that, son)

***** I also speak French, Spanish, German, Potuguese amongst others, so feel free to use any of those languages, bring it on baby*****

And I can say that, too, cause I'm waaaay older than you!

Yeah, I loved your story - wonderful characters, very real. So, you speak reams of languages, eh? How about Icelandic? Frábær brjálæðisleg saga, alveg meiriháttar! I love how straightforward and vulgar, yet also sweet and caring Robi is. I have a feeling Beth's ego got an enormous boost from her encounter with him, whether or not they continued to actually have a relationship.

You definitely have a writing talent and a wacky, attractive view of the world. You go, guy! (Sorry I'm anonymous, but I forgot my user name and password long ago. But still, you should know that you are appreciated!)

OR IS HE JUST TRYING TO GET EVERYONES ATTENTION WITH THE BLACK/WHITE THING. THESE PEOPLE THAT CANT WRITE ALWAYS WRITE BOUT THIS OR BIG DICKS. THEY CANT REALLY WRITE A GOOD STORY. DONT FEEL BAD BECAUSE THERE ARE PROBABLY ON BOUT 5 WRITERS IN LOVING WIVES THAT ARE REAL WRITERS.

This was a good story...just a bunch of peeps getting their freak on. Keep up the good work.

After 12 years of childless marriage I had a one nite fling in Atlanta with a young black Bellmam and ended up pregnant, long live potent black /white erotica

and kill yourself along with your whore and the bastard she gave birth to

The only this story did for me was to induce nausea.

Other than that, your story was meh! I've already forgotten most of it. 1/5.

was this? 1*

Why that introduction? Where was the wife in this story? I just saw a divorced whore who fucked and got pregnant...No wife!!! so 1* for the introduction and 1* for the story!!!

Written to troll the readers. Written by a horny teenager with thoroughly unlikable characters spouting inane dialogue and doing really stupid things. Laughably bad.

1 star