by localsub1
He never would have done what they wanted. And since they forced him and had pictures they were going to jail for a long time. What a bunch of idiots. Did they not think he might go to the Police? Idiotic story.
If some person treated me this way payback would be very painful. She would spend the greater portion of her life as a whore when I sold her into captivity.
I mean really. This whole thing was epically stupid. Even for fiction his actions were ludicrous. Even if he kills them all he'll never get even. Just an awful story. No stars. And even less than no stars for not writing a sequel where he does get revenge.
Walk over to her and lay her out with one punch and take the camera. What are the women going to do, beat him up? And the gay guy isn't going to want any part of a fight. Really poorly thought out drivel.
Kristi,Tiff,Sara,and Missy all found hacked to pieces in an open field. Kristi found with Charlie's dick rammed down her throat!
Never will they be successful with the blackmailing!!! He goes to the cops and they go to prison for a very long time!!! So only in your pervert fantasy about gay will things happen like that!!! Think things through before you post!!!
Don't listen to the last comment. We are here to read fantasy and get off. It was a good story about being humiliated and finding his place. Good job.
Well written,wish the story had been longer...The story made me horny.so I must get off on revenge topics
Get a rape kit done. Hire an attorney. One of the girls or Charlie tells the truth to avoid prosecution and the rest go to jail. File a Civil suit against the girls. Even if it fails, he outs there actions. Or man up. Move away, change his name and start a new life. And then start to plan. All the girls either die or end up sold to a Mexican whorehouse. No one walks away from this whole. Horrible, unfinished story.
1 star