by LaPatitMort
I Loved this story very sweet. Keep up the good work.
This story will be mentioned on the Author's hangout review thread.
This just goes to show that ANY cock can make ANY pussy pregnant!
This just goes to show that ANY cock can make ANY pussy pregnant!
6/7/07
My best friend died today. He like me live his life as he wanted, and had a full life. For some reason, I could see him as Top, becausehe was a female magnet, nearly to the end of his live. I have had toe good fortune to share that similarity. Ihave NEVER read a better piece of erotic literature. I too have used the written word to help me make a comfortable life. I appreciate qualty in print when I see it. You took a great deal of he pain I was feeling as I read your offering. Thank you so very much. You should never have a bleak moment in your life with you sensitivities and abilties to express them. I plan to read more of your work, but I doubt that it will top this one. My good friend and I would have probably been friends with you had we the chance. Again, my thanks for a job so very well done. Duke Knox
What a outstanding series. Excellent writing. Hope their is more. Thanks for the pleasure of reading the whole series.
Was sad story i wished shed stayed with tom he seemed like the one who deserved her more. Good story anyways was so un predictable and everything a story should be. Keep up the good work and ill be looking into other things by yourself.
I usually loathe the "impregnation" theme and was quite prepared to dump this one in the circular file with the rest of the hackneyed one-handed typists; but after a slightly confusing start, it dawned on me that this wasn't the typical formulaic "idiot wimp husband gives wife away" OR "cheating slut wife gets pregnant by lover" theme. As it progressed, I was rooting for a good outcome... and by George, it delivered!
If the impregnator had been a stranger I wouldn't have approved. Had the story veered off into the typical "interracial" crap found on Literotica I'd have been angry. Instead, your writing had me thinking of missed opportunities and wistfully imagining I was the lucky SOB, the "20 years younger" gent with a shot at a decent, passionate woman.
This proved to be a warm, thoughtful story with a happy ending. Thanks for that!
What a great conclusion to the "Cruise to Alaska", Tom being the loving father to Linda's child (maybe) giving her his son who would love her and grow old with her and yet Tom would also be their in the roll of Grandfather seemed to make a wonderful ending to the story with a happily ever after for this family. Well done 5+++stars. It would be nice to see a continuation of the story of Linda and Rod going forward in their life, but in the end, I suppose, that this story is enough and leaves their happily ever after and the rest of story to the readers imagination.