All Comments on 'Getting The Contract'

by scorpio00155

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A night in Hell might be more appropriate title

This is one story that left me emotionally drained, satisfied, yes, but drained.

A fairly simple plot device forms the basis, and only appears when needed. The action is literally beyond words, and the characters, though mostly only ghosts to fill the intermissions between the main characters, are well developed for their purposes. The writing is first class, very well scripted to nail down the reader's attention, and fulfill the reader's expectations.

metallianmetallianalmost 18 years ago
Wonderful way to get a contract

This is a wonderful and exciting story, I could almost feel that I was there watching all the action that is created out of a simple plot and converted into the most hot story I've read in the Loving Wives section. Great writer, Keep the good work. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
why does it always have to be the woman?

supposed one of those many guys had HIV?

what?, is the guy gonna say, "Honey, I'm so sorry that you contracted this deadly thing, but you don't know how much I love you for having done all those erotic sex and got us out of our debts and started our business on a sound footing? But don't worry, honey,,, scientists have come up with some pretty potent drug cocktails; we will get al lthe drugs you need to defeat those little vicious viruses!"

it's so stupid, even for fictionalization,,, and the wife, on denying him sex:

"Honey, I tried hard, but since there's no way I can come up with some LOGIC as to why I sucked and swallowed everything given to me; why I allowed them to fuck my butt, but never allowed you, and so on,,, Well, since I can't think of any reason why you should ALSO NOT get those things,,, I guess I'll allow you to do it, too. After all, you are my loving husband, right"???

how stupid and silly is that? LOL

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
Didn't like it a bit

From the dated premise of moving in business by pushing sex to the deal to the idea of pimping one's wife as part of a couple's future career move -It just seemed tacky and incredible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Vicious pimp bastard

Disgusting story about vicious pimp husband who sold his slut wife to customer to get contract. Sorry I ever read it.

the Ct. Yankee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Bad

Real bad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
worst ...

should not write stories like this

kensai1kensai1over 13 years ago
morons

ignore the morons who gave this bad comments, especially since they don't even have the balls to comment from their account, but hide behind the "Anonymous" comment function. I for one thought this was a really, very well written story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
decent stroke story

Just because I could never behave this way or let my wife be a whore doesn't mean I can't appreciate a stroke story for what it is worth and this one was well written. End of story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
One of the best I've read

There are times that you will do "whatever" it takes to get something done. She did it for her husband. I applaud her for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good job

I like the whole idea, and feel it was well written. I would have made more of a ceremony or feature of the shaving part to add to the earlier humiliation. I also would have made her serve drinks or appetizers between indicents to add to the humiliation. Whenever I have been involved in something scary, my knees or hands shake, i can hardly stand. I would have made it a smaller group, or a prolonged ordeal over several parties with increasing audience participation. I would have her bring in a bowl of water and washrag to clean each person before the blowjob. I think the story could have been shorter and just as good. To me a blowjob is everything!!! Just the one action added with lots of humiliation is expotentially exciting. Great job!!! I can hardly type after this!!!

RePhilRePhilabout 13 years ago
Didn't like ths story

What a bunch of losers circling the toilet bowl. Absolutely no redeeming qualities what so ever. Well written though.

Fighting41Fighting41almost 13 years ago
Dont bother with it

There is no redeeming feature to this story not do yourself a favor and steer well clear of it

ExpDomMExpDomMalmost 13 years ago
A Good One

I'm surprised by the negative comments on this story. I thought it had a good storyline and was well written. Worth the read, I think.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
CUCKS GALORE

but now we are rich///////TK U MLJ LV NV

tongun6tongun6about 12 years ago

i like these type of stories where wife gets abused and husband has to watch it. can anyone recommend other stories like this.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 12 years ago

A really good story but that dude is a fool and the worst kind of coward. Any idiot could see what his wife was going through and to make her bare it alone is unforgivable. As for Wellswood, Ghupta and Errol if he cared about his wife half as much as I do he would get payback. Even if it ment paying a gang to grab them and bust them up or violate them and leave them filthy naked bleeding out side of a huge public venue for maximum effect. But then when it comes to hurting those I love I can never forgive. Great story thanks

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 9 years ago
Hey, business fail for many reasons. It is a fact of life and many people survive.

That a man would consent to this just to save his business is one thing, if his wife wanted to do it and they went through with it he could have gotten even years later, there are many ways it could have been done. But to just go on as though nothing happened is a cuckold's way. I have read other of your stories but I definitely did not like this one.

calflashcalflashalmost 9 years ago
horrible setting

Even with her agreement for a man to virtually pimp out his wife is unfathomatible. Getting aroused at his wife's humiliation makes it even worst. I see no way she would stay with him after what she went thru nor could he probably ever sexually satisfy her again

loveable_guyloveable_guyalmost 9 years ago
I disagree with all the others

I think the story itself was highly erotic. I doubt that this could ever be real-life. But, the story line is great.

I am a cuck. My wife fucks other men with my approval. So, this falls right in line with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I disagree with disagreeing disagreementer !

To be good disagreeable disagreementer you have to disagree by disagreemnt ! There is no option but to disagree !! Dis this asshole!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Distgusting

Distgusting story of humiliation and basically rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sad

This was very well written but still a bad story. The subject matter is just gang rape. If he truly loves her, the business isn't worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Synopsis of scorpio00155 story ....

Disgusting CUNT WIFE + a cheating WHORE wife Apologist agenda = a "faggot" PIECE OF SHIT, wannabe writer waiting in his bedroom closet for his THREE HOLE CUM DUMP "LOVING WIFE" to bring home a real man to fuck her slimy asshole so he can 'cum" up with another literary gem like this STEAMING PILE OF SHIT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
The ending...well...

I like the story and the way it is written, however the ending, for me, was anti climatic.

Also, putting myself in that situation, i don't see how I wouldn't have rescued my wife, and taken revenge on those who treated her that way. I kept hopping he would go to his car where he had a gun hidden, and then used it to rid the world of this scum.

I think something should have been added to explain what this was all about. Why were there other women there? Did they go through this ritual too? What made the men at the card table more elite than the others? I gave this story a 3 because it lacked this information, and ended poorly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Just awful

Thoroughly sociopathic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lot of hate for a great story. I loved it and hope others will. It's not everyones cup of tea (Coercion, gangbangs, anal) but some people do like that.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineover 1 year ago

Sex is supposed to be fun, loving. Not forced, raped, cock choking a person til she can’t breath.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

They really didn't love each other. I would trade any amount of money, any success, to keep my wife from such a horrible experience. Because I love her. They are doing the exact opposite. It looks like he has no problem living with a prostitute.

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