All Comments on 'Getting to Know Mom Ch. 03'

YAY! I'm not pissed. :) For a moment I was worried that you would end this story with the husband/son only being a voyeur. So, yeah, this was a nice first effort, definitely one of the better ones, and very erotic given its short length. I for one definitely think you should revisit this storyline or these characters. Maybe you can write more thoroughly about the two weeks that happened after this chapter ends, but you might want to make that 3rd person if you do so that Kayla and mom can have their private moments together be told as it happens. Even if you stick with 1st person, I know that whatever you write will be good. Also, don't worry about the short delay between parts. It was only a few days and some authors here take weeks, if not months, to post the next chapter. Looking forward to more from you.

For your first series you did great. I followed this story from day 1. The whole concept was new to me. I have only one small complaint and that is that this final chapter seemed alittle rushed. The sex scenes didn't have the details that the first two chapters do. But I also know that it's not easy to write a story #1, and #2 it's not easy to finish a story. I still say BRAVO job well done. I'll keep watch for your next submission.

The series was a scorcher. Thank you for writing. I voted 5 stars on all of them. I wish however, you would have ( or would in the future) add more details of the threesomes or twosomes between your characters. It would be nice to see how they interact with each other after the ice has broken.

keep writing!!!

All three entries were very well done and kept me looking for more. The chapters could have been just a bit longer, though. At least 1 1/2 or two pages per chapter is better to assure that your audience has time for a happy ending of his own.

i hope we'll see more of your amazing work thx :)

5/5

A well done storyline with a lot of kinky sex, the only thing that caught my eye was some of the misspelled words that caused the flow of the story so stagger a little.

Other than that the story was well done. thanks

great finish to your story, am looking forward to more of your work

I needed to read all three of your chapters because the next was better than the first and you saved the best for last...but the first was what kept me wanting more...Don't Stop Writing...Your writing makes me very horny

Expecting more. Take your time. The pace and build up was nice.

Nicely written, Momsb7. I'm sure some of us pervies dream of such a relationship, eh? I'm looking forward to your next work.

And what an understanding and loving wife.

Loved this story. I'd really like to hear about further engagements of the three of them.

great story, nice wind up.

She only lived ten minutes away now, and she needed some help with her window shades. "They're in my bedroom," heard my mother call out to me. When I went to her room the shades were drawn, and she was in bed waiting for me.

please extend this if any part is real and i believe it is, even if it wasn't i want more , its like a series with the life and times, so put together part 4 please

The story was so erotic I was intensely stroking my clitty dreaming I was involved in my mind if there would have been a gay fourth it would have been perfect for me but you still had me cleaning cum off myself, good story,,

The ultimate husband/son fantasy! An incestual threesome with the two most important ladies is his life! So hot well done!!!!

Brilliant original story.

Seemed real to me.

Loved it!

This is a truly tender love story between mother, wife and son. I like it when characters are emotionally and psychologically mature enough to accept the fact that a person can love more than one person at a time and that they are loved equally. I woyuld like this story to continue; hiowever, after so many years - that is life.