All Comments on 'Gia, the Van and Ladies at Play'

thanks... great idea... great storyline...new angle... i am a published author and if it's alright i'd like to suggest the services of an editor to just add that little bit to make it more readable... i use the services of hottie for my submissions... she's really very good... you haver real potential..not a real criticism... just ... more please

You tell a very good story.

Sincerely,

Richard

A wonderful story, I love it, please more! Thank you for a great reading experience!

Oh my god this is my dream come true. I am dripping wet and can't wait to leave this computer to squirt myself.

this is master piece you are a GOD