All Comments on 'Gift-Wrapped'

And proof that a story doesn't have to be long to be good.

You conveyed a huge amount of emotion and love in a very short span of time, and did it very well. Good story and an excellant read. Thanks, Alex.

Hugo

I loved the tags being numbered so that he'd have to "open" his gift in the correct order. "Do as you're told" was a nice touch, too.

Very nice story, Alex. Loved the wrapping paper idea, and this entry was a delicious and satisfying tidbit. Good luck.

Alex, that was very well done. No wasted words but no feeling of being rushed or abrupt. Thanks for the read and good luck in the contest.

Insert tab a into slot b <grin> Gotta love a man who knows how to follow instructions! This was short, sweet and fun. Good luck!

and sooo good!!

Great job - Good luck~

~Honey

Proof that a good story doesn't need many words.

Thanks for a pleasant read.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

A short but fun read that made me smile. Good luck!

Cookie :)

Nice read, funny and sexy at the same time.

Good luck.

A tasty little present.

Well done.

and quite an enjoyable read. You do this genre very well. Good luck in the contest Alex.

I would love a Christmas present like that.

Boyd

Excellent Alex!

Especially managing to get humour into an 'Insert Tab A into Slot B' story <grin>

Thanks

John

and sweet story. Why have I never gotten a Christmas present like that?

... this was a gift. I agree with Boxlicker, I want a gift like yours.

"Wrap it up... I'll take it!"

Best of luck in the contest, Alex!

sweet. Just what I needed before going to bed. Thanks.

A cute happy outcome story well written. Thanks. A refreshing change of pace.