All Comments on 'Gifted Ch. 02'

Now that's a hell of a start to a good story. keep it up!

The chapter seemed too short so I must be into it! Bring it on! Good Job = )

I'm hooked. Good work. Keep it up.

That tells us why Sci-Fi. Like the story so far cant wait to see where it goes from here.

when thor was talking to the woman it sounded like she was his wife on earth then died. how could she be a goddess and die? plus why would they let linger in a coma for 5yrs ?

Your second chapter was great, nice work with the dialog. Keep going, I can't wait to see more!

Fantastic chapter. How about giving us some background on Michael and what has influenced the Council of Five to single him out. Can't wait for more chapters.

Please tell me you have more ready to post! Five stars on both chapters!

You have a great start on this series, you are writing a great story except for one tiny, infinitesimal detail..... TONY ROMO as a GOD!!!! Please.. the guy isn't even a great quarterback and I live in Dallas... Jeez... Other then that your story development is great..

the start of this says the man loves his more than his own life the gods tease with a short little visit with them he's all good get real you have no idea what love is!!!

Ur obviously an idiot guess you didn't read where he met his family

tony romo wears the number 9 not 10, but still a good story

A few years UNFINISHED stop now.

Don't bother