All Comments on 'Gilded in Gold Ch. 05'

Agghhhhhh! I cant believe you would leave me hanging like this! Loving the story thus far. Looking forward to hearing more x

I was so excited to see this today. I do believe you promised more next week-was this the promised chapter early? Or (fingers crossed) shall we see a chapter 6 next week too?

Either way I enjoyed Chapter 5 and wait with bated breath for Chap 6. Thanks for sharing your talent.

You really need to add more to to this ASAP. I want to know what happens to Tibby! Please be quick.

Smiling ear to eat as this chapter popped up

Have an inkling who the sister is

I hope tibby dosent get hurt but her slime ball bro deserves all he gets!

Can't wait for the next instalment

So is it Xerxes who truly wants Tibby (no matter how he blusters), or is it Eli? Or since the brothers are bonded, is it both of them who want her?

I think that Tibby is the biggest victim of her brother's monstrous actions, and I really hope she isn't just trading one monster for a set of others. If they truly look at her, surely they should see that? Xerxes seems set on using her with no regard for her life or her safety, and the captive sister seemed to blame Tibby just as much as the men hurting her, when if she thought about what was going on she would easily see Tibby was forced to do what her brother wanted. Tibby may not have physical scars from her ordeals, but her mental ones are horrific. Surely a psychic could see that? It would be depressing if they all turned out to be just as bad, or worse than Daniel.

That was a really awkward ending to an overall awkward chapter. The reason? Nothing happened. There was a little bit of filler dialogue and descriptions with a modicum of actions leading up to something that doesn't happen. It's great that we got some realizations of plot this chapter, but you should have kept writing past the sex scene at least. I'd rather the chapter be longer once in a while than trying to shoe horn in a cliffhanger. If the chapter needs to be six pages rather than one and a half, then so be it. It's better to have a longer, substantive filled chapter than an inadequately short one.

I came across this yesterday and I can't wait for the next chapters! Don't stop

I'm on the edge...