Gilded in Gold Ch. 07-08

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"I'll see you tomorrow?" Tibby asked hopefully.

With a start, he noticed they were at her door. "Of course, I hate leaving you now, but soon I'll have you in my bed every single night. We'll talk. "

Tibby smiled before closing the door. But before it was fully closed, she flung it open and kissed him one last time. Knowing it would be the last time he'd ever kiss her, Xerxes let all the hidden feelings for her bloom. He showed her the gentleness he should have shown her from her beginning, letting her taste his vulnerability. He was so flawed, marred by his numerous sins and for this one moment her touch forgave him.

Tibby pushed herself away, looking reluctant but ducked back into her bedroom and shut the door.

Dazed, victory in hand Xerxes walked back to his room. He now had the outlying map of Tibby's and by extension Daniel's Mental Map. He was already in the process of uploading the data to his PACT, connecting it to the layout he had of Gianna's map. He took out his PACT and put in the premade virus to eat away the slave contract on Gianna's mind. It wouldn't completely erase the contract but it would sever the bond between her and Daniel. The only thing left to do was to completely crush Daniel's walls, which he would do after he took down Daniel's operation.

Trying not to think of the long golden hair and soothing fingers running over his flesh, he immersed himself in Daniel's destruction. After barricading himself in his room, he let Eli back into his mind to aid in creating a program to break down Daniel's walls. The virus would be an exact replica of his walls, matching up his own and destroying them. Tomorrow, he would load that to his Mental Map. They worked quietly through the night, Eli only speaking to him once throughout the long hours.

~You're despicable. You don't even deserve what Tibby gave you.~

He couldn't agree more.

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IsabellaRoggiIsabellaRoggiover 8 years ago
Hei!

Did I read wrong or was it planned so that this story would be finished the previous summer (in 2015)? If I may ask, are you still finishing two chapters at a time or are you planning to publish all 12 chapters at once?

I hate to see the story unfinished but I also hate to admit that I am already sad that it will finish in only 12 chapters :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story, unfortunately left hanging :/

It is such a great read (and I see that Chapter 9 is up). You have 12 more chapters to go?! It doesn't seem like this story need that many more chapters. And when do you plan on finishing it? lol I really appreciate you writing this great story. The technology sounds cool. But at this rate I can see this story finishing in like 2 years... Please don't have us wait that long. Please!

silverangel621silverangel621almost 9 years agoAuthor
Update, sooooo sorry

Guys, my editor just uploaded ch 9 to this story so don't hate me just yet lol, it's summer and I absolutely promise this story will be finished this summer, only 12 more chapters to go :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
BOILING MAD!!!

I AM SO SICK OF BECOMING EMOTIONALLY INVESTED IN A STORY HERE ON LITEROTICA ONLY TO BE ABANDONED LIKE A JILTED BRIDE AT THE ALTER! I WISH THE ADMIN OF THIS SITE WOULD START A NEW REGULATION THAT ONLY ALLOWS COMPLETED STORY LINES TO BE POSTED. AT THE VERY LEAST HAVE AN ABANDONED STORY AFTER A YEAR EITHER BE DELETED OR OFFERED TO ANOTHER WRITER OF SIMILAR SKILL SET COMPLETE IT. YEH... THAT MIGHT DO IT. HAVING SOMEONE ELSE TAKE CONTROL OF THEIR "BABY", "BLOOD SWEAT & TEARS", " LABOR OF LOVE". SEVER THEIR BOND AND RENAME IT EVEN IF THE NEW AUTHOR SO CHOOSES. THIS MAY ALL SEEM OVERLY HARSH BUT THERE DOESN'T SEEM TO BE ANY ACCOUNTABILITY HERE TO THE FANS WHO INVEST THEIR TIME ATTENTION AND FEELINGS INTO THESE STORIES. IT DOES THE REST OF THE TALENTED WRITERS HERE A GREAT DISSERVICE WHEN READERS BEGIN TO READ WITH ONLY HALF A HEART IN FEAR OF HAVING IT BROKEN BY SOMEONE WHO DOESN'T CARE ENOUGH TO FINISH WHAT THEY HAVE STARTED. NOBODY IS FORCING ANYONE TO SUBMIT AN ENTRY BUT THERE SHOULD BE A REQUIREMENT THAT IF YOU START SOMETHING THEN FINISH IT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
please update

i hope that everything is going okay! i honestly would hate for this story to go unfinished because it is one of the best stories on this site.

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