All Comments on 'Gilmore Girls: Dentention'

by patricia51

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rgraham666rgraham666over 15 years ago
Hot

Very hot.

Nice one, Patricia.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dentention????

Was there something wrong with their teeth? Not too bad a story, but I wish you Americans wouldn't assume that these so-called 'celebrities' are celebrated or even known by anyone outside your country. It's a kind of hubris more suited to arseholes like Bush and Cheney [Q-spelling? - even he is almost unknown outside the USA except as a rabid money-grabber and the wanker that manipulates the strings to operate the Bush puppet]. This kind of self-satisfied claim to be the 'best' nation that the rest of the world must therefore be familiar with is just another form of patriotism, and patriotism - like parochialism - is another form of 'pride', and all of them are just forms of paranoia. We really don't know who the Gilmore girls are or might be, and the assumption of inside knowledge about them simply causes blank non-understanding of what you are talking about. Write your stories - yours are very good, usually - but don't foist your assumptions on the rest of us. In the meantime, thanks for your efforts to entertain us, and forgive me if I sound ungrateful - on the contrary, I am so very happy that you people who write put so much effort into entertaining the rest of us peasants. Freddy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
scene glitches

Great as always Patricia, but i have just a few observations. paris' bra seems to be removed twice, and before that Rory was wearing thigh-high nylons leaving her wet pussy exposed (very naughty), and later had on soaking panties. and because they are both such wanton little sex kittens, i think they each need a spanking, i know it always made my ex cum harder.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great!

I have seen enough of the television show to picture the girls, and you've done a great job capturing the essence of the characters and their style of conversation. Now, if someone could just convince Liza Weil and Alexis Bledel to shoot this script.

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