All Comments on 'Gina Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

interesting story. it wasnt rushed . whats missing are characters the reader can identify with. characters that are real. personally im looking for that woman who isnt perfect. i prefer the flawed , imperfect person. the woman who isnt a pro at sex. i would revel in her ackwardness, as i perform in my own clumsy way

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loose?

People don't loose their virginity they lose it.

Try to learn the difference between the two words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great start

He damm well better go after her!!!

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