All Comments on 'Girl Talk'

more please,you made my panties so wet.Iam at work and could not use any thing to get me off. 3 more hours till I can read this again and finish what you started.

It is well written and interesting. A good read.

This is for the troll who commented about the authors profile. He finds submission to be offensive. It seems to offend his high moral standards. This from a man who is reading about lesbian sex. He might consider testosterone injections wherein he could grow enough balls to at least leave his name.

Keep at it you have great potential. I recommend you read a few of Alicia Night Orchid's stories to see where your potential could take you.

A great short piece, and very well done for a first submission. You got right to the important moments, with just enough set up to give us a progression of events, and familiarity with the characters. Very hot descriptive passages, too. I look forward to your next stories! Regards, SheepDog

Short, but oh so "sweet"!

Reminds me of the teenage sex John O'Hara wrote long ago. You have talent.

Suggestion: Do something with this, it begs for a novella of two bisexual friends who share young adulthood together. College, romances, vacations, marriages, etc.

A very titillating story which was believable and very stimulating. Please write more. First time that I have bothered to write a comment