by colleenslittletoy
No need to be nasty. She could had everything that he did for her and rewarded him by taking an interest in his dressing. She could have measured for a cage and given him the vital feeling that they had a relationship of a sort. If she wanted to leave him she could have said, pleasantly, that she was sorry, but she had to move on. The mention of restaurants having to be expensive and ruinous showed that there was contempt from the outset. I feel that the story could have been much better. Nothing is wasted, the story will inspire me to think of variations. Contemptuous Male lovers in these stories area real turn off, as if men must hate each other on sight. Accidentally gave 5 and had meant to give 4.
I read up to page 2. The guy disgusted me so much I didn't want to read more
She was the beneficiary to her pushing his depravity, I was surprised she and her boyfriend didn't keep him around.