All Comments on 'Girlfriend Unattended'

How is this even a story?? "I walked in the door, my friend wasn't there, I looked at his girlfriend's tits, she sucked my dick then I fucked her. The end". Try a little harder.

Very poorly written and too, too short. Next time you write something, sit down and make it more erotic. Did you impregnate her? Did she want to fuck you when you first walked in the door? Did she consider you a "hunk" that she always wanted to fuck?

A good basis, but far too much lacking anything very erotic.

i go to my freinds place, friend is held up, i and his girl friend slut decide to cheat on him and screw him over.

with "freinds" like that, who need enemies?