All Comments on 'Girls' Night Out'

how could she not do it , suckin a bbc is so wonderful, well told is it true, fun to make it truefor sure

when is she goin back , what happened to the other girls

Just wish she would've fucked him!

Keep writing: Can't wait to read how, now that you've had a taste of Black Cock, you go back for more and end up fucking him.

Keep writing. Can't wait to read how, now that you've had a taste, you go back for more, looking to get fucked by a Big Black Cock.

I like it because you can see something like that actually happening vs. some other crazy reads on hear. Keep up the good work!

I enjoyed it. Very hot. Could use a little more paragraphs and dialogue though.

Automatic 1 star. Racist bullshit anyone?

or more erotic, from a cuckolded husband's point of view, than seeing a MWF kneel to service a black man with her hands & mouth...unless it's watching her spread her legs for her dominant master. I can see that it's only a matter of time before the wife in this story throws all caution to the wind. Soon after, I would expect that the author would cross from fantasy to reality in her own personal life and act on her overwhelming need to submit sexually to BBC and become a true slutwife herself.

Go for it girl.

Just call me michelle

Well written and very erotic. Might be interesting to put this story or subsequent chapters in Loving Wives. This author has a great talent...can't wait for more!

I hope your husband knows what you are writing about. I hope he knows what sort of nightmares you dream about. I truly pity such a man as the character in your story and your 'real' husband.

I gotta say the humiliation element is pretty good in this, and of course so is the cuck theme.

Good work, and keep up your research too.

I like this. The only thing that could of made it better would of been for the black man to fill you up on the inside. Then you could of gone home to your loving faithful husband.

She flaunted and teased to the point of getting aroused and then went to the parking lot with him and he smoothly gets her to hold his cock and then blow him.

What is my point? You write as though she is a happy and monogamous wife just out enjoying girls night out - nothing more.

This woman would have gone to the next level and got the guy to fuck her. Was she a slut and a cheat before now - probably not - but, now, tipsy or not, she broke her vows, tasted the forbidden fruit (black or white - doesn't matter) and will, with some reluctance, put herself in a position to be tricked/seduced again.

Somehow she'll justify it in her mind, all the while telling herself she loves her husband and it is just sex - not love. She'll mentally masturbate over the yes/no quandary but in the end, she'll do it - 'Secretly'!

I liked your story so this is not a criticism, just my observation of how one woman slipped, without original intention, into the world of infidelity...soon to be a 'Hot Wife'.

She'll be troubled but it will happen, she has already cheated so the occasional dalliance is the same as once or twice - same thing...and the thrill is almost as erotic and euphoric as the actual act of fucking a strange man.

Good story, Thanks!!!

Loved it!!

-pboy

So pathetic glorifying adultery. Fucking cunts the lot of you. There's no moral standard in todays women, you all deserved to be raped.

The only question here is,when hubby sees her cum-stained dress will he divorce her or think she's been out with Bill Clinton and become a cuckold?

Pretty good story, but the characters are not even developed. To have an excellent story, you must at least develop one of the characters. Hope your other stories are more well written, It is TONGUE, not: t o n g. :)

DUMP THE CHEATING TWAT!!!

If he had ripped her pussy to pieces, I would not have blamed him. She will be back next week and nine months later she will deliver a black baby. And Al will file divorce papers that same day!

This is very common and should also be encouraged. she probably came home and fucked her husband like never before. I encourage my wife to suck as many black cocks as she can.

seems in these stories, all the authors think that married wives are sluts and whores.

any real experiences by wives out there?

HO HUM. The husband knows how to pick 'em. sic. The writer should try to write something original and worthwhile.

Bigger living' bitch

wrong category. should be in interracial