by hotturkey
It's a lovely story, especially for a lover of Renaissance Italy like myself. Now we just have to hope for a sequel ... One little historical inaccuracy, though: women didn't wear underwear during that period. Giuseppe would have had unrestricted access by just moving his hand high enough up Maribella's underskirts.
Absolutely incredible! You're writing is beautiful and I lovee the characters - especially Giuseppe. I cannot wait for the next installment!
I enjoyed the story. Francisco is a Spanish name... even if your character were a Spaniard with that name, he would probably be called by the Italian name Francesco (ala San Francesco d’Assisi) in Italy, as they translated Spanish names when speaking Italian.
Can I plead bad autocorrect?
Actually, I’m not fluent in Italian, so some errors were bound to happen. I’ll correct it whenever or if ever this story is edited.