All Comments on 'Giuseppe and Maribella'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very charming story

It's a lovely story, especially for a lover of Renaissance Italy like myself. Now we just have to hope for a sequel ... One little historical inaccuracy, though: women didn't wear underwear during that period. Giuseppe would have had unrestricted access by just moving his hand high enough up Maribella's underskirts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Love it!

Absolutely incredible! You're writing is beautiful and I lovee the characters - especially Giuseppe. I cannot wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it

I love the history and flow of the story. Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Francisco or Francesco?

I enjoyed the story. Francisco is a Spanish name... even if your character were a Spaniard with that name, he would probably be called by the Italian name Francesco (ala San Francesco d’Assisi) in Italy, as they translated Spanish names when speaking Italian.

hotturkeyhotturkeyalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Re: Francisco or Francesco? by Anonymous

Can I plead bad autocorrect?

Actually, I’m not fluent in Italian, so some errors were bound to happen. I’ll correct it whenever or if ever this story is edited.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Hoping for a part 2 to this!!

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I admit that I like plump women, but not supersize. There's more cusion, who wants to hug a skeleton? Perhaps this is from my long association with the SCA and a bit of time with the Renaissance Fair circuit. Or else I was drawn to those pursuits because I like plump women......