All Comments on 'Given and Taken Ch. 03'

This was a great beginning. Well written. Too bad it was not continued.

Wish this had been continued. Was a good start

Please oh please continue this story

Not a long enough chapter!

This is very beautiful story. So please write the rest

Please finish it. You are a good writer. I wish there was more stories like this one.

What dont leve me hanging . when do we get to know what happens next. great story just wish there was more.

Seriously? You leave it there? Dammit.

Why is there no next chapter? I am waiting for soooo long...please give us the next one. I dont want to wait longer. Its so a good story. Love it

I hope we dont have to wait much longer for your next chapter. Excellent. Love the characters too.

I don't often give 5s, but I think this story deserved one. I love both of the charecters and want to learn more. The inner struggles for both of them are very well written. I hope you update soon.

I really hope you update. I want to see what happens next.

cant waittt for the fourth chapter :)

I cannot wait for the 4th chapter! hopefully its longer..

This is a wonderful story and I'm really enjoying it. You've got a wonderful give and take going between them. It's starting out nice and slow with a good build. I don't usually read the Gay Male section, but this is just great, perhaps I should start reading more of it!

Great Job! I enjoyed reading the first three chapters and i'm really looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.

Happy Writing!

Hmm. Eli could be exactly what I wonder? Glad to this :) and can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this.. And I wait so long for this chapter, it's very short..