All Comments on 'Giving In'

You went over the top, however. What I mean is that it's a bit too much to take all in one sitting. I feel there are at least 3 stories here, one building on the other.

Just saying!

sounds like you enjoy the thought of being ridden hard and put away wet ...

So many fine images to fill my imagination with in this story. Would love to see photos of some of them, to see if the reality is as hot as my imagination.

Probably the slowest story I've read. The author doesn't have the first clue about pacing and spends page upon page on irrelevant things.