All Comments on 'Giving Lauren More'

by shapeshifter37

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26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Fucked up marriage with a cuck and a dirty whore wife.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
This marriage...

This marriage reached its end....Btetr divorce for her to become a whore for big cocks...soon she will need a donkey or a horse to satisfy her...

rixelsrixelsover 9 years ago
How Long Will it Last?

Lauren's statement, "What a fucked up marriage we have," is so true. I guess that when Mike gets tired of fucking her tunnel he can dump her. He can find a woman who won't give off an echo when he motorboats her.

OOAAOOAAalmost 12 years ago
Good story!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!! Excellent story! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
TAKE UP

LITERARY SUICIDE PLEASE A NUMBER 2 SHARPIE SHOULD DO WELL. YOUR STORY LINE SUCKS THE REAL BIG ONE I MEAN REAL BIG HUGE BIG. SHAPE-SHIFT INTO A NEGATIVE NUMBER SO SMALL A SCANNING ELECTRON BEAM MICROSCOPE MIGHT READ THE SCORE.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Subject matter was terrible.

So I stopped reading after several pargraphs, skipped to the end, and rated it 1*.

ExoManiExoManialmost 16 years ago
Absolutely Great Story

Loved it! Will be reading more of your stories soon.

don87654don87654about 19 years ago
Good, but could have been better

Andrea needs to get pregnant by Mike, with Laura accidently getting pregnant by the four guys. They the two women and 5 men could move in together and begin fucking each other at will?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Two words

Fucked Up!!!!!!

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Good

Good story I think I have read one like this before

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