by MsViolent
I disagree - I think you stop at the perfect moment - Mmmm, got me going / got me thinking and fantasising about what cums (excuse the pun) next - thanks x
You write perfectly... But why did you stop at the best part? Both sex and storywise...
I really appreciate when there is a bit of inner dilemma, with the main character. I hope to feel it even more in the second chapter. Will she resist or give into her primal urges?
Well done.