All Comments on 'Glory Hole Blues'

I don't usually read the longer stories, but yours was very interesting! well written, with character development even!

pretty hot stuff, too.

I liked your story and the way you filled in some of the reasons everybody was where they were. You should get an editor to help with your proof-reading, there were a couple of mistakes that should have been fixed before posting.

Keep it up.

Always fun to read about a gloryhole. The frustrations with his wife hit a nerve with me. I felt you did a good job at controlling the situation and making it believable. It read "true" to me, which is the point of any story, right?