All Comments on 'Go Home Ch. 04'

by LongFellow877

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gamma33gamma33over 19 years ago
Florida Hurricanes

The saga of Steve and Laura is so well written and so erotic

I just have to argue for more installments. After all, we've gone through four of these storms (only two effected us here on the East coast, Frances and Jeanne). Somehow I feel a kinship with Steve and don't want to lose his story.

Thank you, Longfellow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Story-

Please continue this,I really liked the charcters, what happens when they go back to work?

LongFellow877LongFellow877over 19 years agoAuthor
We'll see....

Thank you for your comments. Gamma33, you have been a faithful reader and fan. Thank you. We'll see how many more comments/requests are made and how the voiting goes. Regardless, it has been a very interesting foray into the fiction of fornication. Love to all from Longfellow877

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Ivan's up next I guess

Though; as the old saying goes, since practice makes perfect; I have the feeling that Ivan may go by almost unnoticed by these two. They've already proven they have a physically safe place to stay. Except for viewing the damage afterwards, this couple may have created the perfect distractions for natural disasters, falling in love and having sex!

dillicdillicover 19 years ago
MORE

I hope this isn't the end of the saga. I for one would like to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awesome

Awesome series. Well written. Sensual, erotic, realistic and loving. Please write more.

Executive GentExecutive Gentover 19 years ago
Please Don't Stop.

Your characters have an empathy which is rare in these stories, I'm sure that Laura and Steve's adventures will be exciting to watch develop. As a 43 year old uk guy who has recently been fortunate to find love with someone who is 18 years my junior I find this story both ringing true and incredibly stimulating. So please don't stop as you have great insight into what we older guys can enjoy!!! My partner loved it too, and I was later rewarded for showing it to her to read. So once again please don't stop!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please continue with the same chatacters

Please continue, the story line was great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story

One of the best stories I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved It !

Loved It ! ... Really great !I would like to read more of this story and any others you would care to submit...(Gotta agree with you about that time thing though )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh yes

Please may I add my request for more of this wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story........

If it will get us more chapters may I add my wishes to the others , more please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
steve and laura

great story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
It Can't Be the End

You are an amazing author. This is one of my favorite stories. Please write more about Steve and Laura. This is really, an unfinished story...so you have to write at least one more chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good

You need to finish the story and see how the end up

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 8 years ago
There must be more

I loved this story so much I want to see the aftermath of this hurricane. Will they stay together? I really hope so, they so compatible and loving. Such an emotional connection after a short time together is something to treasure forever.

Please write some more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Really great

I just loved your story's , I hope there will be more I would love to know how the two of them get on ???👍👍👍

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pickup

The nice thing for me was I found the first part by luck. Checked out the author and found the rest of the stories. Was a great read and didn't have to wait for each chapter. You have my thanks for a great job.

mikon4004mikon4004about 2 years ago

Wonderful. Nice to see love and sex.

Story

More plese

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