All Comments on 'Go West, Young Man! Pt. 07'

I'm gonna be honest with you this was severely disappointing for me I almost feel like what's the point of reading any more of this series this chapter was the proverbial boner killer that being said I trust you as a writer and will still check out the next chapter to see if things can be fixed because this left a bad taste

Why make a good incest story into this? Ruined the story till now.

Should have started fresh with new characters and setting.

First Family Planning ch2 now this.

Fan of your series Man of the house, and your unique, hardcore uniquely Raw non-vanilla writing style.

But shoving shit twists of what was (until now), a good start of a series, in your readers faces is distasteful.

Just make a story of a main character cuckholding all the males in his family before this uncle alpha male appearing in the end trope ruins your works.

Hot~ 5 stars man. I don't know what these other people are expecting. its porn. don't listen to idiots.

ok so I'm gonna put this out since the comments seem to have not been picked up properly the primary thing about a number of these types of stories is character consistency you built up all these characters to be a certain way and then you dramatically altered them in a way that is implausible for instance in this they had a nice bdsm lifestyle going then boom the two females all but throw away the one they considered their master for someone else and the original main character is just going to rollover prior to this chapter the characters had a sense of realness to them now they feel like cartoon characters that no one cares about anymore

The story just went to shit, wtf was that?

And then we have an author that comments on his own story with "...don't listen to those idiots", how childish can you be? You legit lost all credebility with such a behaviour. Just accept that u completly ruined a story and work out how to not let this happen again.

They couldn't make the dude disappear in the ocean instead of turn sissy boy and hoes

I thought that part 7 left the track. I believe that the best thing to have done is to have the second male come in and just join the party instead of taking it over. I think that it was a mistake to infer that an alpha male would just cower.

What a garbage ending!

I wanted Jeff to be used more.

Complete a blow job.

Use him in cum swaps.

Clean up pussies , etc.

Go ahead and fuck him.