All Comments on 'God has a Plan for us All'

A very sweet and emotional story...sexy and full of life...wonderful job

Great story. So full of emotion, sad, happy, love. Thanks

The story, in concept, is actually rather good. There are some significant writing flaws, though. Particularly starting in page 2, you changed locations and even days of the week, without any indication to the reader; and that makes the story a bit difficult to follow. And then there's the unexplained matter of Rayne's rape by the priest and yet, her intact virginity for Will. So, basically a good story, but in need of an unbiased editor.

-- KK in Texas

I was impressed...great sexy story...hits you in the heart. Loved it!

It was a nice story that would have been even better with some proofreading and editing. Any chance that you will write any more stories?

Great story! Reality at its best. You made them real people! Not some perfect Barbie Doll and the man is a real man. Not some guy stupidly saying 12 inches and big as a Coke can. Could use some proofreading but still a great story! I hope you continue to write. Best to you!