All Comments on 'God's Angel Ch. 05'

by dagan732

Sort by:
  • 17 Comments
Aftermath82Aftermath82almost 13 years ago
I don't know

I'm not sure that I like 'bout this kyle thing.. I'm still hoping there'll be a way for gabe together with ethan ..

CryptictatCryptictatalmost 13 years ago
loveing it

i really like where this is going. i hope that Ethan dosent come back in the picture. Gabe deserves better then him and it sounds like Kyle, just might be what he needs, keep up the good work.

Mistress_CanadaMistress_Canadaalmost 13 years ago
Hurrah!!

Too many romance stories have the protagonist stuck on someone who treats him badly and the protagonist just forgives and forgets. I love that you're bringing in a wonderful new man for Gabe.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 13 years ago

I have to agree I like where this is going and yeah to Kyle he sounds cute... can't wait for the next chapter don't take too long!!!

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 13 years ago
OMG

Darren is funnier than hell! It seems like Phil balances Darren. And Kyle sounds like a really great guy. I love how things are working out in this series. The new image God showed up in was an interesting and neat twist, lol. He sures keeps Gabe on his toes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I really like this b/c most stories do the guys meet, conflict happens, they break up and get back together. I love how you presented this relationship that the reader wanted to work. But you didn't make it boring by Ethan realizing he made a mistake. You now start this new prospective relationship. I hope you won't have him dive into it. If he was really in love with Ethan he'd need time to move on. I'd love for Ethan to come to find him after he's together with Kyle! Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

though this is a great story, I certainly think that Gabe's got way too much luck. I mean so many nice, cute guys in that time....? and all of them interested in him...?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yeah Kyle!!

I love this story...and would love to see Gabe and Kyle together....even if Ethan comes crawling back!

afrodita79afrodita79almost 13 years ago
love it

i´m so glad that Gabe has found Kyle and hope he doesn´t take to much time to chose.... and when his happy and settel that the other one sees him and relices what he lost.... sorry but he disurvs it....

Post the next one soon

HoosierFriendHoosierFriendalmost 13 years ago
Can't wait for the movie!

Fantastic! Was not like reading a story - rather like watching a movie. I have never felt that way about anything else I have read in Literotica - and I have read a lot of good stories here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Team Kyle!!

lol :)

love this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wawawawa

Omg i love this! this made me so happy! But the previous 3 made my cry.... tears literally rolling down my cheeks eek! Idk how i got so emotional

julrijulrialmost 13 years ago
oh my god; literally!

Oh my god ! Your'e killing me here! I thought you had me all over the place with the beginning chapters, but boy you got me up another 3 notches! Most excellent! and i think i said that before..Finish me off already! I just cant wait for the rest. Your writing just floors me. Thank you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
loveee it

i love this soooo much, ur un amazing writer, just one doubt phil and darren jave been together for 7 years, but in the first chptr phil met the in laws for the first time?? or am i miss understanding?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This is so good

I am loving this story!

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004about 9 years ago
Darren is an insurance salesman, right ?

I never thought that he was going to be this hysterical ! I always thought insurance salesmen were boring ! He's such a nice guy ... and a bit on the camp side ... lol

Darren is a real blessing for poor Gabe and he's proven he's a good friend to him, and Phil too. Thank goodness for them both. As for Kyle, I'm so curious about this guy and hopeful as well ! >.<

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
New York

Great story, I've been to some of the places Gabe went to in New York a few years ago, all the way from Lil old England, lol, thanks keep up the good work

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userdagan732@dagan732
Dagan732 pretty much sums it up

story TAGS

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES