by dagan732
I'm not sure that I like 'bout this kyle thing.. I'm still hoping there'll be a way for gabe together with ethan ..
i really like where this is going. i hope that Ethan dosent come back in the picture. Gabe deserves better then him and it sounds like Kyle, just might be what he needs, keep up the good work.
Too many romance stories have the protagonist stuck on someone who treats him badly and the protagonist just forgives and forgets. I love that you're bringing in a wonderful new man for Gabe.
I have to agree I like where this is going and yeah to Kyle he sounds cute... can't wait for the next chapter don't take too long!!!
Darren is funnier than hell! It seems like Phil balances Darren. And Kyle sounds like a really great guy. I love how things are working out in this series. The new image God showed up in was an interesting and neat twist, lol. He sures keeps Gabe on his toes!
I really like this b/c most stories do the guys meet, conflict happens, they break up and get back together. I love how you presented this relationship that the reader wanted to work. But you didn't make it boring by Ethan realizing he made a mistake. You now start this new prospective relationship. I hope you won't have him dive into it. If he was really in love with Ethan he'd need time to move on. I'd love for Ethan to come to find him after he's together with Kyle! Keep writing.
though this is a great story, I certainly think that Gabe's got way too much luck. I mean so many nice, cute guys in that time....? and all of them interested in him...?
I love this story...and would love to see Gabe and Kyle together....even if Ethan comes crawling back!
i´m so glad that Gabe has found Kyle and hope he doesn´t take to much time to chose.... and when his happy and settel that the other one sees him and relices what he lost.... sorry but he disurvs it....
Post the next one soon
Fantastic! Was not like reading a story - rather like watching a movie. I have never felt that way about anything else I have read in Literotica - and I have read a lot of good stories here.
Omg i love this! this made me so happy! But the previous 3 made my cry.... tears literally rolling down my cheeks eek! Idk how i got so emotional
Oh my god ! Your'e killing me here! I thought you had me all over the place with the beginning chapters, but boy you got me up another 3 notches! Most excellent! and i think i said that before..Finish me off already! I just cant wait for the rest. Your writing just floors me. Thank you!!!
i love this soooo much, ur un amazing writer, just one doubt phil and darren jave been together for 7 years, but in the first chptr phil met the in laws for the first time?? or am i miss understanding?
I never thought that he was going to be this hysterical ! I always thought insurance salesmen were boring ! He's such a nice guy ... and a bit on the camp side ... lol
Darren is a real blessing for poor Gabe and he's proven he's a good friend to him, and Phil too. Thank goodness for them both. As for Kyle, I'm so curious about this guy and hopeful as well ! >.<
Great story, I've been to some of the places Gabe went to in New York a few years ago, all the way from Lil old England, lol, thanks keep up the good work