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Click hereHis first words to me chilled me to this day, "Johnny Havers I presume? Me and you need to talk."
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Anonymousabout 12 years agoif you cannot give constructive criticism, pls shut ur mouths!!!!! its amazing that you r complaining, wen u took the tym to read the story all the way to chapter 6. this story is absolutely fab...love all the characters....Good work armywife2009...u r brilliant...dont mind the silly comments of meanies....:)
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI'm sorry but some of us here looooove Johnny and Luke and the rest of the crew! People aren't perfect, they make mistakes and bad judgements so why should characters be any different?
If you want a story a certain way, maybe write one yourself?
Great work armywife, I swear I've read this story a million times!!!
armywife2009almost 13 years agoAuthorI appreciate good and bad comments. My characters are my own, i will make them who i want them to be and they are either loved or hated. Thank you all for all your comments :D I personally love Johnny, Luke, Leslie, all of them, for their stupid drunken ways :D
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoYou sur hav a lot of weird characters, they are highly neurotic as well - just remembering that Johnny (the weirdest of all) wanted to protect Leslie and William by telling Luke - who considered Leslie H I S? How stupid can Johnny be? Dont tell me - he is not even close to his potential of stupidity!
