All Comments on 'Gone'

by DarkFang

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Soulmates are rare

No word can solve the pain loosing a soulmate leaving you helpless powerless lifeless ..... The near future is struggle fighting crying ..... All is lost happiness peace love trust and much more ..... If its being a part of your life so hopefully the deepest tales are behind and sunshine floods your being again

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I hope this was a piece of fiction but I think probably not. If it is true life you have my condolences on the loss of this person. If it was fiction, then you've captured loss very well.

J

markellymarkellyalmost 10 years ago
Wow indeed...

Brutally honest and a damn good read. It captured the sentiment of so many who have been in that position.

Five well deserved stars.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 10 years ago
Nice

Very heartfelt tale

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
DEBILITATING DISEASES

shatters all save the memories. TK U MLJ LV NV

chytownchytownalmost 10 years ago
What A Great Poem***

Thanks for sharing.

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An amateur writer looking to improve. 2/1/2021 I've resubmitted the third chapter of What Have We Done? as it didn't seem to be making any progress in the review process. Here's hoping it works this time around. 1/22/2021 The third and final chapter of What Have We Done? ha...

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