All Comments on 'Gonna Sell The Bitch's Car Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Wow, you certainly have a way to pull your readers into the story and have them imagine your words coming to life. Outstanding story. Thank you for sharing it with us. 5+ stars!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

ASSHOLE WASN'T YET MARRIED TO HER YET THERE WAS SO MUCH FUCKING DRAMA IN DUMPING HER!!!

ASSHOLE'S REVENGE WAS A JOKE

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

He disappears for 24hrs and all the cunts are up in arms, right from the cheating skank who he lends the Mustand to the slut Moira and bitch Dottie!!

WHY IS THE ASSHOLE DELAYING IN GETTING RID OF THE CHEATING SAMMI

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

His revenge was a joke - what a pathetic wimp musician

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The anom from a day ago must be a 100% grade A certified A**hole based on their comments about the story. I'm not sure what they have against Moira and Dottie. As far as I'm concerned, their characters are written beautifully.

Ocker53Ocker539 months ago

Excellent story, long but excellent ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Just truly phenomenal you had me crying again at the cemetery. You made me laugh and cry at the concert and what a drop the mike moment he did on Sammi and Gary. Seriously man you have just blown me away with thus story. G.O.A.T. No more needs to be said BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Emotionally taut and wonderful character development. Well written. Hearing Moira's own tragedy was an excellent counterpoint. Weighty stuff. Liked the benefit concert.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Another GREAT chapter, thank you sir! 5 stars again!

somewhere east of Omaha

LegacybadLegacybad3 months ago

This just keeps getting better. Great work. Thank you for sharing. I hope we can see a little more burning.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Not a fan of lesbian or gay characters in the story Also not a fan of most of the music within either. Never heard of a lot of it.

Ravey19Ravey192 months ago

I don't know most of the music but it didn't detract from am amazing story, so full of emotional moments. 5⛤

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Asshole needs a better lawyer and the clueless wimp took his own sweet getting rid of the trash

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

What's with all the screaming cunts, from Sammi to Moira to Dottie. This man is a fucking wimp, bullied by bitches around him.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Wiley the wimp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I love Moira. I really hope the MC marries her. On to the next chapter!

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