All Comments on 'Good Girl vs. Slut Ch. 10'

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The ten chapters (so far) of this ongoing story are extremely well written. Not only are they very erotic, but the author also has something to say on the nature of who we are and our often conflicting sexual desires and responses. Trisha's internal monologues are by turns, deeply arousing and then thought provoking. This chapter (ten) is, for me, rather harrowing, but I still found it riveting reading. This is due to the writer's skill in describing a frankly frightening situation with such flair.

The 'Good Girl' story strand is the best thing I've read on Literotica.

Great story, I would like to see Mandy degrade herself into a slut like Trisha has done. Great series so far,....

1) Why did Trisha not chomp down on one guy?

2) Where are the police?

3) Why did you make Trisha a victim?

I really enjoyed the stories before this, but this one sucked emotionally It was not bad in terms of sex, but the undefended rape scene was not good.

This wasn't my favorite in the series, but it was good. I hope to see another chapter.

All your other stories were so great and hot but this was unacceptable. Rape is not something to make "sexy" or okay. It's a real thing happening to real women and men every fucking day and it just pisses me off you tried to make it a sexy thing guys can jerk off to and girls can come to. You just lost a loyal reader.

Rape isn't something to be taken lightly. Really bad story.

I loved this series. Each chapter has resulted in fabulous orgasms. This one unfortunately just resulted in flashbacks of my own rape. This is your story arc and I respect that this is a story you wanted to tell, but if you could edit this chapter to include a disclaimer right at the beginning (similar to your all characters are over 18), I think you would help inform your readers who may be traumatized by reading this story.

Screw these other commenters. After all these years this is still the hottest story I've ever read.