All Comments on 'Good Medicine'

by LilyTigress

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What does it take to show love...?

The story of Maggie and David begins with her having coming out of sugery and him offering her "Good Medicine", to her surprise. Such details, the eye contacts, the pace of breathing, the sense of touch, and the sense to respond goes unnoticed in this story wonderfully and expertly written. Lily Tigress' story leaves the reader thirsting for more, and to ask themselves one of life's questions: what does it take to show love?

Thank you, Lily, for sharing this story with us.

I wish you many fame and fortune.

- Tommy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Beautiful story

especially for a first attempt Lily

sorry I've not read this sooner hon,

the love and pleasure shown between them

is wonderful more soon please

<<Alan>> xxx

DivaBeastDivaBeastover 15 years ago
good, BUT...

my only complaint about this otherwise great story: at only 7 days post-surgery, vigorous activity like sex is dangerous. it increases the risk of bleeding.

please forgive my geekery...

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
ei, write some more

you wrote such nice cute stories. please write some more.... :)

ReadIt1ReadIt1about 1 year ago

4/27/23

Love it. Nice creativity and as a reader you can get into the feeling of the atmosphere.

Thanks

Bob

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