by Arinn
Great story! Easy to follow and very passionate. Brings the reading into the story and the voyeour becomes the participant. Keep it up!
Sensuous, HOT, Love between two people in love. Well written and a beautiful idea.
...you could have written such a wonderfully descriptive erotic encounter...without having lived it!! Bravo to you and your lover. Well done, well written.
Have a great day, take care,
~Sky~
We loved both of your stories. Please write more.