by Nehkara
It went from third person to first person back to third? Did anybody else see that?
Whilst it's refreshing to read a story in which two teenagers want to build up a relationship before incorporating sex (not as unusual as some people here seem to think), it's clearly heading in that direction. I do hope you continue the series and chart their growing intimacy.
Many friends have similar feelings and reactions. Neither wants to make first move and chance ruining friendship. better to take a chance than regret it forever.
sweet tale. the ideal that you must have sex to keep a boy friend is all to
command now days. the boys mostly demand it as a right.
No sex and very sappy. Despite the author's note, they could have easily been 10 years old. Still it was well written.