All Comments on 'Good Sex Can Come Unexpectedly'

by Egmont Grigor

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HawaiiBillHawaiiBillabout 19 years ago
You caught the emotion.

Stories here that I like a LOT rate a '4.' I've been saving the '5' for especially fine writing and excitement. You captured the physical action beautifully and your focus on emotion was very rare. Great work!!

watching96watching96about 17 years ago
great feeling to this story

Excellent writing. You portrayed great feeling

in this hot story. I can't wait to read some more of your other stories.

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