by MicheleNylons
Nail on the head of the mindless trash that some people write. Power to you, well done.
Think I will go touch up my lippy and adjust my stockings ...lol
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Very funny story. I read this stories to live out my fantasies, though some do seem too unbelievable. This one is unique and does a great job of reminding us we need to laugh too. But now i'm scared to go to McDonald's thinking that Ronald wants to do me with his quarter pounder.
A very entertaining satire of turgid erotic cliches. Wish I'd thought of the multiple-choice conceit. Well done.
Next time , How about putting some thought to it and writing a real story instead of your, 'One form column A and two from column B stunt.
Anyone else feel like they took a high school quiz after reading this? I found it difficult to read and follow along with the story. Maybe it is just me?
second funniest story you've ever written (funniest was the one where you don't reveal that the narrator is a boy until the final line and everyone got mad in the comments)