All Comments on 'Gramps' Legacy Ch. 04'

Why end it so soon? This story has so much potential. I hope you reconsider and keep writing.

Hey JB, just a quick note to thank you for this story. If you should ever feel the urge to revist it I could see the possibility of further adventures.

On a similar subject I think it would be cool to add to the ASTARTE series. Maybe the gods could need his assistance or have a task for him to do for them.

Anyway, thank you for your effort and your talent.

M51

5*****

Just finished and have to say I am sorry it is the end (for now). Sure do hope you have more to share. This has been one of the best stories with all the good stuff included. Incest. anal. oral. on and on....loved it all. Will be checking for more chapters to cum....pun intended..LOL.

I really like this story as far as it goes. I just wish it was finished.

I do with LitErotica had a placeholder function. I don't like favoriting unfinished stories but don't want to forget to check back for more.

I would really love for further chapters to be added

hope you are planning to write more on this story its very good so far

It's 2015 are you going to add any more to this story???

I have had an enjoyable time with this and you other stories. Is it possible to download the complete story or do I have to copy and paste? Thank you

Ronnie

loved reading this, just wish it was longer

Only comment is about the word warlock, which means 'oath breaker.' Those who use it to describe themselves are ignorant of the root language and its association as someone who is evil. The alternate translation of warlock is cannibal.

A witch is a witch, male or female. Or you can use mage or wizard. Sorcery is not as dire but is still associated with evil, having a Latin origin instead of an Anglo-Saxon one. Anthropology has it backwards, but not surprising, considering the early years were dominated by men imbued with Victorian values underneath the academic veneer.

In many societies, witches tended to be female, and women having magical power literally scares the bejezus out of some men (yeah, pun intended). But men with magic? That's okay, because being men, they know what they're doing. In societies that believe in magic, curses are often from evil witches (women), and you go to a sorcerer to remove the curse (male magic to defeat female magic). For me, it's what you do with power that makes you good or evil, not the plumbing.

I would enjoy further adventures if the writer were so inclined - though nothing submitted since 2014, and the bio said he was in his 70s, so maybe not likely.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

will there be more of Gram's Legacy????

see above

Hahaha

I know you haven't been active since 2014 but i can hope! Lol

Hope you get back to writing

Using the second generation to breed for the third generation sound like a great way to carry on.

So do you have the urge to create?

what fun. When do we get involved in second generation incest, magic and adventure?

Your story is full of inconsistencies. Like when whore Marie said, "Will, I swear to you, if you put her in harm's way even a little bit, I'll cut off your balls and feed them to you". Come on woman, your daughter was raped over and over again for years by your partner and you didn't even raise a voice. What a shitty story!! Its a relief you stop writing.

For me, this is an unusual story. I liked it but honestly overthough the psychological effects of the fictional characters.

Should be continued. Keep going!!!